Mentioning at the very end that the reader should care about what a famous rich person is doing goes 100% against what this chapter is trying to achieve.
Thank you for your comment. To be precise, I said " you can focus on potentially more positive things in society." I made sure to use the word "can" instead of "should" since should is a judgmental statement. It was only a suggestion.
Could you elaborate a bit more on this point you made "goes 100% against what this chapter is trying to achieve?" Thanks.
Mentioning at the very end that the reader should care about what a famous rich person is doing goes 100% against what this chapter is trying to achieve.
Thank you for your comment. To be precise, I said " you can focus on potentially more positive things in society." I made sure to use the word "can" instead of "should" since should is a judgmental statement. It was only a suggestion.
Could you elaborate a bit more on this point you made "goes 100% against what this chapter is trying to achieve?" Thanks.